Edit the following paying specific attention to the pronouns.

  • I recall with great pleasure the good times that us children had at our annual family reunions when I was young. Our cousins and ourselves, along with some younger aunts and uncles, played volleyball and softball until after dark. They were a lot of fun.
  • It seemed to my cousin Terry and I that the grownups were different people at those family reunion. That may be true of family reunions everywhere.
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